tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post1759862564612618696..comments2023-10-29T07:11:49.766-04:00Comments on Just Fiddlefarting Around: EphemeralJeffhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-87155312146768209112013-07-05T16:08:26.534-04:002013-07-05T16:08:26.534-04:00no human eye, but through your words many can see ...no human eye, but through your words many can see through your eyes.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-54338893461351891722013-07-03T04:11:52.262-04:002013-07-03T04:11:52.262-04:00My first time here - really like: "It may be ...My first time here - really like: "It may be no human eye<br /> <br />Has ever seen what I see..." Good stuff, Nico - I'll be back.... All the Best to you Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-18575523880546916412013-06-22T08:54:31.274-04:002013-06-22T08:54:31.274-04:00very picturesque in just a few words, Nico! very picturesque in just a few words, Nico! DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-60236594612858858612013-06-21T23:52:44.384-04:002013-06-21T23:52:44.384-04:00Chortles and guffaws!Chortles and guffaws!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-4972531554026777182013-06-21T22:34:10.521-04:002013-06-21T22:34:10.521-04:00Thanks Mike!Thanks Mike!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-18969821850329146792013-06-21T22:30:15.985-04:002013-06-21T22:30:15.985-04:00Thanks Truedessa!Thanks Truedessa!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-40650504250970074852013-06-21T21:42:58.659-04:002013-06-21T21:42:58.659-04:00Perhaps, but thank you for relating this! Herons a...Perhaps, but thank you for relating this! Herons are ethereal and haunting birds; nice use of it in this sedoka. Great write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-32465109907943983122013-06-21T20:48:27.895-04:002013-06-21T20:48:27.895-04:00I saw a blue heron today at work..and I thought ab...I saw a blue heron today at work..and I thought about a friend..your words ring true..nothing stays the same..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-79346531301254493922013-06-21T19:26:22.825-04:002013-06-21T19:26:22.825-04:00Thanks Cress, there's nothing scarier than a c...Thanks Cress, there's nothing scarier than a college-educated redneck.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-1856605755030713522013-06-21T19:22:16.992-04:002013-06-21T19:22:16.992-04:00Thanks Rosemary, for such a kind comment.Thanks Rosemary, for such a kind comment.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-81145473680111778622013-06-21T19:21:52.765-04:002013-06-21T19:21:52.765-04:00Thanks Victoria--you are always welcome to come al...Thanks Victoria--you are always welcome to come along!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-8554573716458003962013-06-21T19:20:56.426-04:002013-06-21T19:20:56.426-04:00Thanks Karin, I enjoy reading and writing Japanese...Thanks Karin, I enjoy reading and writing Japanese form poetry, I don't know why I don't do it more often. The twang comes natural!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-3054736681097526822013-06-21T19:18:01.560-04:002013-06-21T19:18:01.560-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-76892303472639808192013-06-21T19:12:15.111-04:002013-06-21T19:12:15.111-04:00Thanks Sam!Thanks Sam!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-32919305660604713282013-06-21T18:42:48.564-04:002013-06-21T18:42:48.564-04:00Parmenides packed brain boggling sedoka and I thou...Parmenides packed brain boggling sedoka and I thought you were such a simple country lad:)Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-17674450415799839452013-06-21T18:38:14.020-04:002013-06-21T18:38:14.020-04:00..truth!..truth!kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-56121377420727496182013-06-21T17:56:29.199-04:002013-06-21T17:56:29.199-04:00Oh, this really gets to me! Simple yet unforgettab...Oh, this really gets to me! Simple yet unforgettable language creating the whole scene and a wealth of emotion.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-74892110801832583262013-06-21T13:47:29.292-04:002013-06-21T13:47:29.292-04:00I want to be there and see what you see. I love th...I want to be there and see what you see. I love the blend of the heron (a Japanese feel) and the place you are that feels quite familiar to me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-15055116548128086212013-06-21T10:59:35.107-04:002013-06-21T10:59:35.107-04:00This is just lovely - and very true and has this g...This is just lovely - and very true and has this great Japanese feel to it combined with a kind of free-ranging twang. Very nice. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-1742402273756762492013-06-21T10:49:50.530-04:002013-06-21T10:49:50.530-04:00That's true nicono eyes ever seen it like you....That's true nicono eyes ever seen it like you.. love this!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-9100409104270710062013-06-21T09:56:09.177-04:002013-06-21T09:56:09.177-04:00Thanks Laurie--I love the green herons, but it sou...Thanks Laurie--I love the green herons, but it sounds like yours need to find a nice quiet creek somewhere.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-90648366929442232452013-06-21T09:55:04.274-04:002013-06-21T09:55:04.274-04:00Thanks Rowan--some thinkers see this perennial fre...Thanks Rowan--some thinkers see this perennial freshness as instability!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-62993434094031641052013-06-21T09:40:06.190-04:002013-06-21T09:40:06.190-04:00Thanks Aprille--Even a tumbling creek has some sec...Thanks Aprille--Even a tumbling creek has some sections of slow water! As for the "I"--I'm forever trying to work out who that could be as well. Might as well be playing with sounds while I figure it out!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-17850181282538941712013-06-21T09:34:49.924-04:002013-06-21T09:34:49.924-04:00Thanks Bjorn, I'm happy you enjoyed it!Thanks Bjorn, I'm happy you enjoyed it!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4986882181347414615.post-85244031461613332502013-06-21T09:30:48.918-04:002013-06-21T09:30:48.918-04:00Thanks Kelvin, there are as many different version...Thanks Kelvin, there are as many different versions as there are different seers.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.com