Last week, my friend and fellow poet Henry Clemmons posted a poem about nightmares. This afternoon when I sat down to write his poem was still in my head, so I thought I'd run with it. Thanks Henry; and please, poets, send your week's thoughts to dVerse OpenLinkNight!
Nightmares
The night-fears return,
a little green man
with clicking teeth
and omnipotent eyes,
fingers pungent red
gripping a corner, any corner,
leveraging a feline pounce
to send me running,
running, I cannot see
my unsteady footfall
pounding on
and on —
terror, stale-tasting
like motionless basement air,
and if it weren’t for nightmares
we’d want to close our eyes
and sleep all
the live-long day.
"leveraging a feline pounce" ... I like this line. And this:
ReplyDelete"terror, stale-tasting
like motionless basement air"
And isn't the ending the truth?
Thanks henna, we don't actually have basements where I live, but I remember playing in my Mamaw's basement as a child.
Deletesmiles...yes perhaps the nightmares keep us from living in dream land and actually getting a few things done...ha...the clicking teeth...ack...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian--nightmares are good for something after all!
DeleteI'm reading this just as I go to bed- pray those little green men don't come visiting
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn, hope you slept a peaceful sleep.
DeleteOh lord, I have never experienced little green men and never hope to. Thank goodness I am not one who (usually) has nightmares.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, this character actually was a constant feature of my childhood nightmares. Funny how vivid dreams can stay with you over the years.
DeleteScary! I wouldn't want to sleep either.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie--so far I've been quick enough to stay out of the green man's grasp!
DeleteI wouldn't mind sleeping all the live-long day....even with a nightmare or two. but they definitely do make it harder to return to peaceful slumber. and I might miss reading all this wonderful poetry that spills put into cyberspace.
ReplyDeleteThanks RMP--I agree, poetry is a good reason to stay awake.
DeleteYou have described nightmares very well:
ReplyDeleteterror, stale-tasting
like motionless basement air~
Good to see you Nico ~
Thanks Grace, strange details and associations in dreams are fascinating. The human mind is a funhouse and haunted house all rolled into one!
DeleteThe nightmares that rake our spirits..leads us to fear..hope better dreams are on their way..
ReplyDeleteThanks Truedessa--better dreams are always just around the corner.
DeleteExcellent description of nightmares, nico. Yours is the second nightmare poem I have read this evening.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela--yeah, what's up with the nightmare theme here lately?
DeleteDang. I'd be happy to sleep just through the night. I like your descriptions of those "things" and the feeling of running...so exhausting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Victoria--I heard a Yale professor of psychology say that the most common dream is that of being chased. Interesting.
Deleteleveraging a feline pounce:
ReplyDeletereally delivers on fulcrum, fear and motion.
the whole has an air of tension
which is vital and sustains the energy,
awarding that essential
creep and claustrophobia
gripping the attention . . .
and throat.
Thanks Arron--I think that tension is critical to a good nightmare!
Deletethis made me remember some of the night fears of my youth..luckily i very seldom have night mares nowadays..the motionless basement air grabbed me most here as it comes with a scent..
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia--yeah, I prefer the sweet dreams.
DeleteI'd sleep in the day to avoid having nightmares...
ReplyDeleteThanks M.J.--daymares are just as bad!
Deletea little green man with clicking teeth...now that would scare me... a great description of nightmares...must say have had my share of late hoping I don't see any green men this evening! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Di--hopefully the nightmares fade away soon.
DeleteDreams like that would keep me awake for sure. Nicely penned, Nico.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tony!
Deleteit's late here - i will surely have to check for the little green man before i go to bed.
ReplyDeletesucks that i'm too lod for a night light... ugh.
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Thanks Miriam--night lights only help when you're awake!
DeleteI've been chased in my dreams all of my life. Night terrors where screams won't come out no matter how hard I try. I hope the green man doesn't step forward tonight. Well written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Beth--always stay a step ahead!
DeleteA good capture of nightmares, nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala!
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