Relics
The
mountains that in ages
past
were level plateaus;
the
shoreline that has
not
kept its place;
the
bones of extinction layered
like
words in a holy book,
telling
the story
of
what once was;
the
changing sky,
a
glimpse of the universe
passing,
rolled together
as a
scroll.
Everything
everywhere
always
never
the
same,
yesterday’s
relics,
like the
boarded-up shops
in any
small town.
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For dVerse OpenLinkNight. Claudia's post had me thinking about culture, history, place, and this is what came out.
sobering end...the boarded up shops...far too many of those ghosts of old business...and towns...but its change you know...and the mountains just keep growing....and today becomes history
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian--there's always a bit of sadness joined with change.
DeleteWe are on the same page this week... how awesome is that!! I love the format.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie--you know what they say about great minds.
DeleteYes, everything is ALWAYS changing. A certainty of life.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary. Change is something we can count on, for sure!
DeleteA great layering of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Matt, I'm happy you liked it!
DeleteRelics are fascinating things ~ And yes, things are always changing & never looks the same ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace, for stopping by!
DeleteIn life nothing remains the same the world is always changing..I find it sad to see boarded up buildings..I wish we could just tear them down and plant trees..even sadder when the building is historical filled with history and ghosts that would like their story told..relics can be wonderful to explore..
ReplyDeleteThanks Truedessa--there's always some personal history tied up in old buildings, especially if you've lived in a town for a while.
DeleteThis sings, it is very mesmerizing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anna, for enjoying the song!
DeleteGreat word choices - it builds outward and upward and then back again. I really like this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Debi, for taking the trip out and up and back again!
DeleteI like how you bend time and space with your words, Nico!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marya--I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteYou write the thoughts that happen in peace of mind, peace of spirit. Wonderful. ~peace, Jason
ReplyDeleteThanks Jason--sometimes the only peace I can find is on the page.
Deletenice write..everything in motion..constant changing, never returning..like the relics of yore likened to boarded up towns
ReplyDeleteThanks Dorianna--always changing, both on large and small scales.
DeleteNice reflection and great use of metaphor. Never constant, always changing and yet this is the place we call home.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ginny, I'm happy you liked it!
Deletei like how you ground this with the last image of the boarded-up shops
ReplyDeletein any small town... makes it even more palpable...it's sad when whole cultures are no more after a time of blooming.. nothing as constant as change..
Thanks Claudia--sometimes we need a reminder that our sense of permanence is an illusion.
DeleteGreat images and then smacked with the ending, the truth, to big to ignore anymore. Excellente!
ReplyDeleteThanks Henry--it's a little unsettling to realize how fragile we really are!
DeleteI admire the closing lines, how you personalize it into the human realm - yet still distant, as though looking at an old tintype.
ReplyDeleteThanks M, for looking at this tintype poem with clear eyes!
DeleteLove how you brought the ever changing geological philosophy of change to the last stanza... the rhythm and the tempo like a solemn walk...
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn, I'm happy you liked it!
DeleteGorgeous writing...love the changing skies passing like a scroll...perfect! We live in times of constant change whether it be the geological or economical we just have to find new pathways through the landscape.
ReplyDeleteThanks Di--I can't claim originality for the scroll bit. The image comes from the Bible (Isaiah, and I think probably other places as well). I hope the good Lord doesn't mind that I borrowed it!
DeleteGreat rhythm to this, Nico.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela--I'm happy you enjoyed it!
DeleteChange is the only thing we can expect but there is so much knowledge and beauty in the trails behind us. Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Beth--it's good if we can take the knowledge and beauty along with us.
ReplyDeleteGreat ending to a great capture..the boarded up shops....a sad reality.
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